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The Timeless Traveler's avatar

“Glory is a loan” is a line worth sitting with.

Christopher Clay's avatar

Thanks! Even the gold on the pyre will melt.

Ryan Hall's avatar

Thank you for the articulate response, it's much appreciated. Time to try out a few different versions.

Ryan Hall's avatar

Great article. I love Beowulf, and I hope to one day, as King Hrothgar put it, "winter into wisdom". Do you have a recommended translation? I've only read the Seamus Heaney version.

Christopher Clay's avatar

Thank you, Ryan. And you picked a good phrase. "Wintered into wisdom" is a lovely rendering, so you started in a strong place.

Fair warning: I am no scholar or linguist here. I read the poem for the history and the weight, and I have found the real fun is reading a favorite passage across several translations and watching what each one hears.

A few doors worth trying. I think Heaney is the modern standard: muscular, readable, built to be spoken. Tolkien's prose translation is deliberately old-fashioned, like reading the poem through stained glass. Fun, though not my favorite. The illuminated edition I photographed for this piece uses Gummere, which is actually one of the old ones and it keeps the alliterative drumbeat of the original better than most. I think Liuzza is faithful and clear.

My honest advice: take Hrothgar's sermon and read it in two or three of them. The differences will teach you more than any single version. That is how I read it now. It’s worth it.

Amy Thornton's avatar

Moving article with timeless insights, and that rendition of his sermon was amazing! Reminded me of something that would emanate from Khazad-dûm ⛏️

Christopher Clay's avatar

High praise, thank you.